Blog #15

Upon getting the script back to examine, I noticed me and Mauricio made many mistakes. For one, we were not very descriptive with events happening in the script. Looking back this is definitely something we should’ve been more on top of. The dialogue was also generally confusing to follow in combination of this. To accommodate this, the new script will be much more descriptive with what is happening in the scene specifically. More context will also be given to the story, to make everything in the story more plausible and easier to follow.